The Beginning of Something (A Chick Evens Short Minnesota Story)

"In the '60s, the Eastside of St. Paul, MinnesotaThey both ate in silence in the parking lot and
was a very industrious part of the city therewatched the cars drive by; across the road was
were lots of smoke coming from the large andthe riverfront.
big plants, and factories, foundries, and so forth."Looks like a half moon tonight," he commented.
Then one day when I returned, after being gone"I think so," replied Zaneta, adding, "you know
for a long while, everything seemed shut down.everything dad."
The big buildings were all closed up, windows with"Oh, Zaneta, not really; please eat your
wood coverings over them, and doors with chainshamburgers, don't waist them."
on them, locked tight. Many I heard sold their"I can't help it," said her father."
machinery, and land and moved elsewhere."What is it dad?"
"Iron that that once was used in the foundries"You're pregnant, and Mike is a lazy one!"
came from Northern Minnesota, and now theyThey sat there for a moment without talking.
used European Iron I guess, and that put a lot of"You don't have to marry him you know, I can
folks up there out of work, as well as down here,take care of you!"
and the foundries closed down also. And I worked"I don't know," she said.
for Whirlpool (he pointed his finger to his left side"Of course you do," he said.
across the bride, as they traveled down Arcade"No, I'm not sure." She replied.
Street), I made vacuums cleaners there, and ice"Well, what do you think is best?"
makers. And I worked at Malibu Iron, just northChick Evens looked at the moon coming up over
of Whirlpool a few blocks.the River.
"The new available acres of land I see were"It isn't fun anymore is it?" he asked her.
bought up by large supermarkets. Of course, thatShe was afraid to look him in the eyes. He looked
was thirty-years ago, you weren't even bornat her.
then. The only thing left I see from that period, is"Not much of it." She said.
a broken down hut that was used for a parkingShe looked on at him back, said, "I guess he'll
lot attendant near the bridge, Whirlpool ownednever make much of himself, if you want to take
that too. All the other old foundations haveme away, I'm ok with it, perhaps it is better, yes,
disappeared." Said, Chick Evens to his sixteen-yearit is better I think?"
old daughter, sitting opposite him, as he drove his"No," said her father," his hands holding his head.
car down the street, she had been living with himHe sat there for a long while thinking. He felt fire
for a year, by her own choice.approaching his face, he was hot, and it was
"I can't remember." His daughter said, "It seemslightly chilly in the car.
more like it's always been the way it is now!""You don't need me, but if you do, you can come
Chick Evens said nothing, just kept driving downback and live with me, and your child, once you
the street, then out of sight of Whirlpool. Thenmove out, if you move out. Maybe I should be
Evens cut a sharp right hand turn onto East 7thtelling you to try and make it a good marriage, I
Street, alongside the Mississippi River, and to theknow you love him, but love doesn't pay the bills,
inner part of the city.and he's just plane lazy."
"What's the matter dad?" asked Zaneta."Yes," said Zaneta, laying the back of her head on
"I don't quite know," he said, turning on thethe top part of the car seat.
heater, it was November, 1991, and the cold"How do you feel Zaneta?"
weather was starting to kick in, in Minnesota."Oh, far away, dad, I want to go far away, with
Zaneta leaned on the back of the seat, heavily,you, I know everything will be all right with you, I
waited for her father to say something more. Itwant to go away from him, but you're right, I do
was not quite sunset. They could both see thelove him, yet he will never ever make anything of
river.himself, I'll always be poor."
"Are you hungry?" asked her father.Zaneta pulled out another hamburger from the
"I don't feel like eating," said Zaneta.bag next to her and her father, got out of the
"Come on, we'll stop at McDonald's, and eat!" hecar, walked across the street, leaned on the
said.guard railing, and looked down into the river.
"All right," she said, trying to please him.